The Thursday, Sept. 24 edition of The Herald-Dispatch was similar to the previous editions I read through. It featured minimal errors and was well written overall. And it also continued the trend of micro editing issues rather than macro.
The front page of the paper had a story titled "Marshall celebrates namesake's birthday," however, The opening paragraph is non-objective by saying John Marshall made the U.S. Supreme Court what it is today. Most of the other issues were the reoccurring theme of ending the lead paragraph with a time element.
There were also a few instances of cliches being used and lead paragraphs beginning with a prepositional phrase. Overall, it continued the theme of being a well written newspaper aside from the few micro editing issues that pop up every once in a while.
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