The Thursday, Oct. 15 edition of The Herald-Dispatch was well written and professional from start to finish. Outside of the common micro-editing issues, there were no majors issues involved in this edition.
A common, reoccurring theme I found, much like other editions, was beginning the lead paragraph with a prepositional phrase. I found the same minor issues of occasional wordiness, cliches, ending the lead paragraph with the time element and editorializing.
Overall, this edition was basically the same as the previous one's I have read through. It featured the same minor micro-editing issues and featured no macro-editing issues.
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