The Thursday, Oct. 9 edition of The Herald-Dispatch was a professionally written, relatively error free written newspaper that continued the trend of the issues I have critiqued previously. There were no macro-editing issues and it only featured micro-editing issues.
Some common, reoccurring issues were beginning a lead paragraph with a prepositional phrase, ending the lead paragraph with the time element, occasional wordiness, cliches and editorializing. There was also an issue of a story or two being too long.
All in all, this edition was on par with the previous editions I have read and continued many of the same themes. Outside of the micro-editing issues mentioned, it was a clean issue.
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